Spam Body

Jan. 18th, 2005 01:09 pm
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The body of a spam:

cheese wheel near tape recorder, 
ocean defined by jersey cow, 
and bonbon from avocado pit 
are what made America great!

And know the dark side of her bubble.
Indeed, razor blade beyond give a pink slip to beyond carpet tack.


The first stanza is great, but the second is a little lacking.

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Date: 2005-01-18 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drake-da-dragon.livejournal.com
the double beyond in the last line of teh second stanza ruins it.

Sounds better as "Indeed, razor blade beyond give a pink slip to a carpet tack."

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