Do you edit?

[robbat2]

Anybody with a few moments to spare, and not minding critiquing work, take a look at this:
http://www.orbis-terrarum.net/~robbat2/intd214/5.html

Tell me what you think, suggeestions for changes/additions/replacements/removals etc. Telling me that I suck is OK as well, as long as you do it in a constructive way!

Comments

[zeelle.livejournal.com]

You might want to add a dash right here: "Lastly, but by no means least, I would like to address one issue of the building I have noticed -- it is most evident in the halls of the Robert C. Brown building, but exists through the rest of the university as well."

Otherwise I see no grammar or spelling mistakes.
If this is going online as I see it, you might want to increase the space between the Summary, Analysis, and other sections to define them a little better, and make the font size 12pt to increase readability.


*Christine

[robbat2.livejournal.com]

Thanks.
The upstream side was forcing it to 12pt font anyway, but I handled the rest of it.